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If a writer writes the words
They will ebb and flow with wonder
Like watching tides, make you ponder
Light the skies with shooting stars
Create images of lands a far

If a painter paints the words
The colour will inspire all
The shape you will adore
Breathless as you stare at it
Because you know that all is yours

If a sculptor crafts the words  
The form they take, so sleek and new
Bent and moulded for only you
Seeing all that binds is glue
You know the hands that made it true

If a dancer danced the words
What magnificent flair ,
They are as light as air
Whirling and gleaming, cracking like fire
Soaring , taking you higher and higher

But

I am not a writer , a painter , a sculptor nor dancer
I am none of these things
So when I say the words

I'll miss you ,dad

They seem cold and flat
But know I mean them just as much
And that I guess is that
For my dad's wake ......:shrug:
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zanngriv Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
OMG! It's so beautiful! I'm touched!
Yes! you are a writer , a painter , a sculptor and dancer!
you are a lot more then that!
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Spydi-mel Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:huggle: thanx so much
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zanngriv Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
sorry, than
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soulfulSIGHT Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
:cries: that was sooo beautiful I :love: it!!!!
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Spydi-mel Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww , thanx much ladeh :huggle:
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Kim-S-Schultz Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
:tears: :rose:
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Spydi-mel Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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pbird12 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh sweetie, that's beautiful :hug: I'm sorry :sniff:
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Spydi-mel Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanx ladeh :huggle:
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FireWolf23 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
An awe-inspiring piece, my friend. It made me very pensive and a bit sad all at once. It's amazing how words placed so carefully like the brushstrokes of a painter can evoke and create so many feelings within a person's being. You have an amazing way with words, buddy. Great job and I look forward to seeing more of your work ^^
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